Provide Feedback and Revisions

Prompt:

Act as an experienced scriptwriter. Thoroughly review the provided [script] and offer constructive feedback. Analyze the script's structure, dialogue, character development, pacing, and overall narrative coherence. Identify any plot holes, inconsistencies, or areas that lack clarity or depth. Provide specific recommendations for improvements, alternative plot points or dialogue suggestions, and any other insights that will enhance the script's quality and appeal. Your feedback should be comprehensive, objective, and aimed at elevating the script to industry standards.